Can you please talk about Aloaris' daughter? Was a part of her soul used to make Alan?(the mc-new being/3rd soul) Can you please reduce your hobby of using POV of many characters without continuation ? Sometimes the POV is of another character in the next chapter. Your grammar is improving. Thank God. Will Aloaris' daughter come back to life and fall for our mc? Can you tell in the novel more about Aranus and his life?( His love story included). Can I know more about Aloaris' daughter's life and death?( Her love story included).
Blazuku
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LIKEBlazuku:Hi! thank you so much for the honest review. About your questions about Aloaris's daughter and Aranus, yes their relationship will be covered later on in the story. I will change my odd habit of the pov switches, and thank you for saying my grammar improved!
Blazuku:Hi! thank you so much for the honest review. About your questions about Aloaris's daughter and Aranus, yes their relationship will be covered later on in the story. I will change my odd habit of the pov switches, and thank you for saying my grammar improved!
ah, it's a sub affinity of the space element, I apologize if I missed mentioning it in a chapter where the stats were revealed.
DefyingDemon:And he now got gravity affinity (high) why is it also missing.
DefyingDemon:Why does Alan rank appare on his status when he looks at in in the later chapters ?