Review Detail of GeneralDeFartos_L in The Villain's Story

A novel heavily inspired by The Author's Pov. The settings are almost the same. It's an enjoyable read at the start, I read till 200 and gave up. I'm dropping it. WRITING: it feels like autocorrect messed up words, also the punctuations are placed wrongly. Noteworthy examples that break me "where/were/we're" author never gets it right. Some sentences are unreadable. PLOT: author adds things and changes things mid story, lots of useless characters introduced that have no added value to story, plot changes and information changes cause plot holes(SPOILER: at the start mc gets knocked from using a move and Sabrina gets a reward which is his soul for saving him and she gets it for the reason that mc will get possessed by abyss but the original owner had him take over for the purpose of this not happening, so it's all on big plot hole at this point), confusing reveals (where author had to add a note to explain what's going on separately). MC never actively trained to level up since entering the academy, and it's getting on my nerves, I understand the reasoning, but it's crap. It just feels like author forgot about it or didn't want MC OP all for extra drama. CHARACTERS: Traits given to characters are meaningless most of the time, example: MC is written as if he's a siscon, but from all the scenes with his sister it's clear that it's a mediocre relationship. Other characters were introduced as important but don't add value to the story and are one dimensional (I just can't care about them).MC: I like the mystery of MC, I just don't like the inconsistent personality (I know why it changes, but it felt as if the author just wanted a fun mc suddenly, or other times wanted a stoic mc, and so he added a reason for it). Fights: MC just uses spear when he should be super mana prodigy. big minus.