Review Detail of Blazuku in The Villain's Story
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As a new author who doesn't really know a lot about how to write good stuff, I request you guys to give me 'Constructive' criticism. Whether it's a mistake in my grammar, sentence formation, etc. Also, I'm not doing this just to add another 5-star review to my novel. Definitely Not
The Villain's Story
Blazuku
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Blazuku:The synopsis is confusing, I was high when writing that lol, basically there are three souls, The first one is Aranus, second is James and Thirf is Alan, The fthird one is in control most of the time but is unaware that he is not James because James has done something to him, he breaks out of this later tho
1:yes there is romance later on in the novel. 2:No, not for our Mc, well not multiple. Basically it won't be a harem
IamMountTai:1. Is there romance? 2. Multiple love interests?
Shame. By multiple love interests I don't necessarily mean it would end as harem. Rather, there are multiple heroines interested in the MC. Tho as you don't intend a harem, then only 1 would have their feelings reciprocated. That's what I meant.
Blazuku:1:yes there is romance later on in the novel. 2:No, not for our Mc, well not multiple. Basically it won't be a harem
Ah, if that was what you meant yes there are going to be a few interested in the mc, however only one wins
IamMountTai:Shame. By multiple love interests I don't necessarily mean it would end as harem. Rather, there are multiple heroines interested in the MC. Tho as you don't intend a harem, then only 1 would have their feelings reciprocated. That's what I meant.
Blazuku:Ah, if that was what you meant yes there are going to be a few interested in the mc, however only one wins