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Review Detail of EvilBlueCrystal in Reverend Insanity - Blazing Glory Lightning Brilliance (RI fanfiction)

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EvilBlueCrystal
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Outdated review. Mc is an ordinary novel reader reborn into a world where a person's ability is based on experience and understanding, paired with a shallow personality, beliefs and lack of background from his previous life make him an uninteresting character to follow. Mc no previous experience and time to train. As it stands now, the story falls flat it's following the original with an unremarkable protagonist. The first chapters are a complete waste since they don't introduce anything new or refreshing. Mc has future knowledge, but is unable to remember crucial details, seems forced, unrealistic, and frustrating that continually emphasizes his forgotten memories. Mc reveals his foreknowledge to his grandpa, when he should expect no reasonable outcome from it. His grandpa knowing about the concept of extreme physique is hard to believe, something that is known by clan leaders or those who have ancient knowledge. If someone wanted to create an overpowered main character, why not just make Bai Ning Ning the protagonist right from the beginning? At least she would have a more intriguing perspective, background, and two personalities one from previous world and one is future self. She would be forced to follow the original mc while making use of him, and after that she would do things her own way. The protagonist's presence undermines the plot's concept of survival, because so much of the original mc success is due to his carefully balanced strength, resources, luck, and timing. With this protagonist thrown into the mix, it disrupts the story's established flow, one change would mess up everything, and there's doesn't seem a place for the mc in the future plot, since the original protagonist dies at the start, and it becomes impossible to follow the original timeline. The current protagonist kinda lacks the capability to carry the narrative forward. If the mc isn't smart he should be following original mc like the northern dark ice girl did, while building alliances, planning for future events, and gathering resources.

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Reverend Insanity - Blazing Glory Lightning Brilliance (RI fanfiction)

Jaed21

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CGenipperteinga
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Hey man could you please explain if the mc here is competent, scheming, cunning, manipulative and not a skirt chaser, i like harem but if this mc prioritize collecting pokemons rather than accumulating strenght for the eventuality of a fight with fang yuan then , i would rather not waste my time with it.

Jaed21
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I meant to say "fanfiction WITHOUT a perfect pacing" ofc, rather than a proper novel.

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