Review Detail of Endless85 in Rewriting #1
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As of now only 1 chapter is out so I'll be judging it off that alone... -Grammar and spelling is great so far didn't see any errors in that regard. -Story has a good pace to it not to fast but not painfully slow. -Updating stability: it's far too early to rate fairly. -In terms of characters and the decisions they make: the OC (Isaac) who transmigrates as Issei makes meh and good decisions, the only meh decision is that he's going to join Rias's peerage. While that would be a good decision early on since he gets allies early on, it's gonna suck when he gets the powers of Ashborne and he still has to listen to Rias's orders.
Rewriting #1
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Endless85:True, not to mention devil's weakness to holy weapons depends on the devil's overall durability and strength which can be seen when Sairaorg is hit with Durandal a sword said to be on par with a full powered excalibur and it ends up doing essentially nothing (except chopping his arm off albeit with great effort) Sairaorg didn't even wince.
True, not to mention devil's weakness to holy weapons depends on the devil's overall durability and strength which can be seen when Sairaorg is hit with Durandal a sword said to be on par with a full powered excalibur and it ends up doing essentially nothing (except chopping his arm off albeit with great effort) Sairaorg didn't even wince.
DemonGodLirux:You are right, even though, it would depend on how the autor develop the relationship between the MC and Rias and how fast the mc can get a rank upgrade
Endless85:True, not to mention devil's weakness to holy weapons depends on the devil's overall durability and strength which can be seen when Sairaorg is hit with Durandal a sword said to be on par with a full powered excalibur and it ends up doing essentially nothing (except chopping his arm off albeit with great effort) Sairaorg didn't even wince.
That's actually not likely because ashborne is a godly being on the same level as trimurti and probably even ophis. Mc's potential is too high for rias to reincarnate him with the pieces she has. Besides ddraig himself could problem use his 'domination' to override the function of the evil pieces. Besides when he's powerful enough with ddraig and ashborne's powers do you think he would have to listen to rias . He could probably trash the three factions with himself and his shadow army.
I hope you dont actually make the MC join Rias’ peerage. Theres no need to when you can gain strength on his own.
NHyper:Small spoiler: Kandiaru's blessing.image