Review Detail of StandingInFire in Demon King Ascension System
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Mediocre is the best way to describe everything, not bad but not good either. -Demons don't feel demonic in any way beyond appearance. -MC is just kindoff doing stuff without motivation or any compelling traits. -General origin plot/world is the same as many of other novels in this site but doesn't actually make as much sense in context as humanity isn't in desperate need. -Supporting characters are forgettable.
Demon King Ascension System
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I've also noticed the points you've mentioned, especially the second one, and for that, I already plan to try and make the next arc (which is not far away from the current chapter) have more compelling conflicts than the introduction arc(the current one). And for the first point, Vera was a special case because of reasons, but it's due to my lacking update schedule and generally not fast pacing that I haven't been able to introduce the original residence of the first demon realm(but they will be introduced soon), I will also work on those. Thanks for the review!