Review Detail of in Demon King Ascension System
Review detail
MC has no determination or a goal to achieve. He only survives using plot armor. MC is as lifeless as he can be. There are plot holes. MC has only lucked out till now, photographic memory, second chance with high demon bloodline, high affinity, a system and without meeting Vera he would have died by now. NO HARDWORK or drive to take revenge on the one who almost killed him. Any side character would have performed better than him if they were in his shoes.. Author has to mention that he is 'SMART', which he is not. MC has nothing special to him that makes him "MC". World background is not explained. MC just goes with the flow. He doesn't have any fixed mentality. Not the worst novel but still not up to my standards.
Demon King Ascension System
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Respectable author capable of responding with level-headedness? Is this even webnovel, what's going on... Good on you. I'll give it a try even though it sounds like I'll dislike the book.
darran_:Thanks for the review, I've noted the points you've mentioned and checked them on the novel. It's true that I made the mc's goal in the first chapters too vague/not too significant and I've made an explanation as to why he thinks like that in the earlier chapters and also made his goal clearer in chapter 31. And it is quite a slow start, but the world-building will be added slowly as the mc would travel the demon realm and learn more about them. Once again, thanks for the input. I hope you guys can give the story another chance as I will keep on improving in the future~!image
Thanks for the review, I've noted the points you've mentioned and checked them on the novel. It's true that I made the mc's goal in the first chapters too vague/not too significant and I've made an explanation as to why he thinks like that in the earlier chapters and also made his goal clearer in chapter 31. And it is quite a slow start, but the world-building will be added slowly as the mc would travel the demon realm and learn more about them. Once again, thanks for the input. I hope you guys can give the story another chance as I will keep on improving in the future~!
As long as the comments were not blatant insults without essence, I will try my best to understand their viewpoint, hence critiques are welcomed. Thanks for giving the story a try~
LucidBlue:Respectable author capable of responding with level-headedness? Is this even webnovel, what's going on... Good on you. I'll give it a try even though it sounds like I'll dislike the book.
