Review Detail of Admstrife in The Martial Unity
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I rarely give reviews period (mostly because it takes time and I'm lazy af), but this has been one of my favorite novels to read, and I started reading it back when it had around 300 chapters. The pacing and world-building is so well done compared to a lot of similar novels in this genre. The characters have good flaws and growth as well. I like the fact that the author has been able to keep the rules of the world consistent and grounded within the reality of the world, some novels as the chapters progress lose that grounding and scale, so from a technical standpoint I love this. And I can't emphasize this enough: Time-skips. Some novels like the Legendary Mechanic and others have solid time-skips which helps the story progress and keep things from entering a dull period or keeps the novel from becoming monotonous, and I think The Martial Unity has done a great job of utilizing this from the earliest chapters. A lot of novels, most I see actually, either don't do this or don't do it well, so huge props to the author. All in all, highly recommend this one. You won't regret it
The Martial Unity
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And while yes there is a lot of info dumping, that doesn't take away from the story, especially with the fact that we get three chapters a day, even if there are periods where it doesn't move as fast, the release rate balances that out. Another I wanted to add is the rate at which our MC progresses to higher realms of power. It's just the right amount of time, which clear explanations for why it gets harder and harder to break through, even with the MCs stuff (won't spoil in case peeps who read this haven't read far enough). And each realm of power is interesting in their own right