Review Detail of CosmosGalaxZ in Ash Earth Awakening

Item: Ash Earth Awakening
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

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I can see that author did their best in the novel. However, I think readers will love it more if author can do the prologue a bit shorter and clearer as it is the catchy part of the novel. Anyway great going. Keep up the good work author😊👍🏻

Ash Earth Awakening

ColiJiyo

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ColiJiyoAuthorColiJiyo

Thanks for your feedback. I think so too - it was 3,100 words and so much more than what I wanted to write. So for now, I've kept the prologue but moved it into a chapter of it's own. So that if others wants to they can skip straight to the real first chapter. The prologue helps me and some other as a setup so I hope that this will keep the pacing. :D Appreciate your comment!

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