Review Detail of rbp in A Hentai System in the World of Dungeon Ni Deai

Item: A Hentai System in the World of Dungeon Ni Deai
Rating: 3

Review detail

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not well planned fanfic, i hope you can rewrite it to what was originally your idea and not be influenced by your readers unless it's for the better of the novel/novel go downhill. well 👍 for the effort keep writing and sorry for my grammar english is my third language after all.

A Hentai System in the World of Dungeon Ni Deai

ParodyGirl

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From what i see, the mind control part is the author mistake if they mention not wanting to use it, but do so anyway. but i haven't fully read it yet, so not sure. This author is nice though, unlike some author i knew who keep promising no ntr, but keep writing about ntr.

5mth

ParodyGirlAuthorParodyGirl

Thx for the review!! I don't use suggestions from the readers anymore, and I write what I want :) It really was a dumb choice to write what the readers asked for at the beginning of the story ( I even regretted it later, lol )

1yr