Review Detail of Haz_the_dreamer in (I Stole and re-wrote)Naruto: Kokushibo Template System

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Haz_the_dreamerLv42yrHaz_the_dreamer

Very nice, much better now that you edited it, since you like to edit works could you See if you can edit monster integration, the grammar is pretty bad but the story seems interesting?

(I Stole and re-wrote)Naruto: Kokushibo Template System

Muiyuki_Snowfall

Liked it!

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Muiyuki_SnowfallAuthorMuiyuki_Snowfall

If ya check my profile, You'll find that I've got a couple of books to do, but if I find 'monster integration' and have time, then I don't mind trying to edit it to make a good story better

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