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First Spirit! This is a soul bow. The abilities granted by rings will all be on your arrows. Poison, Speed, Impacts, and even Healing. I'm still thinking about the second spirit, but I'm already writing a new chapter that will come out tomorrow. Tell me what do you who are reading think?
Douluo: New world with an upgrade system
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the first soul is a tool martial spirit. So the second one is better if it is a beast soul, how about a low level lizard without any element affinity he will upgrade to the dragon god level at the end and with each element he comprehension the elements will be added to his martial spirit. if he get the ice and fire well, the fire and water will be added to his spirit.
Maybe if substitute it with the bow, He only need one tool spirit the other one is beast to enchant his body strength
SAURON_:I think you should use a sword with dragon scales and abilities like Sinbad uses.image
With mc’s system and first martial soul he will be op so how abt the second martial soul as a trump card. Smth like susanoo (Strong af defence), Izanagi (From naruto. Long cooldown), Soul Connect? (He can connect the his soul with his lovers granting benefits to both), Revival (Can revive anyone back to life. Downside is there’s no healing only the power to revive back to OK condition.), A martial soul that can transfer bloodlines, A martial that allows mc to create clone of himself. Downside is they are not as strong and the original)
that! I had already thought of a martial soul of cloning. But I still don't know how to adapt the story exactly. So I needed some more comprehensive ideas
xlvlx:With mc’s system and first martial soul he will be op so how abt the second martial soul as a trump card. Smth like susanoo (Strong af defence), Izanagi (From naruto. Long cooldown), Soul Connect? (He can connect the his soul with his lovers granting benefits to both), Revival (Can revive anyone back to life. Downside is there’s no healing only the power to revive back to OK condition.), A martial soul that can transfer bloodlines, A martial that allows mc to create clone of himself. Downside is they are not as strong and the original)
Ooh then u found the right guy. With the cloning u can have mc have fun by creating the akatsuki similar to naruto and they’ll have a goal but the real reason for akatsuki is just for abusing the protag aka tang san and his friends. Of course the goal of akatsuki isn’t something useless instead it’s smth that’ll help the mc become stronger. For example it could be the soul bones, special herbs/items and rare spirit beasts. The akatsuki will reveal themself to tang san b4 the timeskip where he joins shrek. The akatsuki would traumatise tang san or leave him very catious so when akatsuki show up again tang san would become catious and warn his friends (The readers would love his reaction)
Duan_Ru_Feng:that! I had already thought of a martial soul of cloning. But I still don't know how to adapt the story exactly. So I needed some more comprehensive ideas
xlvlx:Ooh then u found the right guy. With the cloning u can have mc have fun by creating the akatsuki similar to naruto and they’ll have a goal but the real reason for akatsuki is just for abusing the protag aka tang san and his friends. Of course the goal of akatsuki isn’t something useless instead it’s smth that’ll help the mc become stronger. For example it could be the soul bones, special herbs/items and rare spirit beasts. The akatsuki will reveal themself to tang san b4 the timeskip where he joins shrek. The akatsuki would traumatise tang san or leave him very catious so when akatsuki show up again tang san would become catious and warn his friends (The readers would love his reaction)
Duan_Ru_Feng:that! I had already thought of a martial soul of cloning. But I still don't know how to adapt the story exactly. So I needed some more comprehensive ideas
please read my comment to you also maybe you can give him a gacha system later on which will allow you to make more ideas but mine is very important.
Duan_Ru_Feng:that! I had already thought of a martial soul of cloning. But I still don't know how to adapt the story exactly. So I needed some more comprehensive ideas
SAURON_:please read my comment to you also maybe you can give him a gacha system later on which will allow you to make more ideas but mine is very important.image