Review Detail of ghost_kuro in In Naruto : Reborn with NEN

if you are undecided whether to read this or not just imagine Blackbeard from one piece regains his pastlife memories then he proceeds to kill all of the strawhats, whitebeard, take control of the marine and kill Garp then becoming so OP. yes MC is a character like blackbeard. well for my review: 1.writing quality-3 stars not bad but can be improve further at least better than some CMTL. 2. update stability-3 stars for now. i cant say much about update since author said he is not serious in writing of which he may drop anytime. 3.story development- quite ok wont give spoilers, but the inner dialogue can be very confusing as if assuming the readers will understand. I think because of poor sentence arrangement. I think maybe it is done on purpose to give a pure evil vibe of MC. Well personally i think its quite a genius of the author , this way there is no need to justify/explain any action of the MC. 4. Character design -only 1 star because theres not much inner struggle for character to mature only open the seal and have a fix world view and no room for growth (maybe debatable) need more chapters to know for sure. there is nothing much to say as for now maybe when we have more chapters. 5. world background - 4 stars because author successfully captured one of the naruto verse vibe. On like how dark the ninja world can be. luckily there is no xianxia dialogue style during family feud hahaxD