Review Detail of Blackwhip in Tachyon: Rise to villainy
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Writing Quality is decent, but a common occurrence in the novel, is that the paragraphs mean the same thing, just paraphrased. For that, 3stars. Character Design is unrealistic in its nature and moral conpasses is nonexistent, but the dialogue is overall pretty much in the middle. so for that, 3stars. Story Development is good, just that the storyline isn't that immersive since all of it is centered around Myles only. Updating Stability is pretty good. Overall, hope that the author gets better at making the dialogues and writing the story.
Tachyon: Rise to villainy
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People like to imagine themselves as the characters when reading fanfics so when he is talking about his appearance or anyone else doing so it ruins the emergence and black people and white people as well as other ethnic people usually act differently also ruining the emergence. Hope this explains why.
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GodOfLightning:People like to imagine themselves as the characters when reading fanfics so when he is talking about his appearance or anyone else doing so it ruins the emergence and black people and white people as well as other ethnic people usually act differently also ruining the emergence. Hope this explains why.