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braway
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the story started or interesting, but quickly developed into a mess. the author uses lots of filler to get to his word count, then adds new important story information, forgets what he wrote 50-100 chapters before, and thus contradicts himself. characters are introduced, forgotten, and sometimes reintroduced with the author just saying they were there the whole time. the whole forging aspect is thrown out of the window around chapter 400 (it might be reintroduced, but I have not read that far). I don't mind the china-is-superior writing style, that a lot of the Chinese authors have, but this author is quite extreme with it, while not being able to put it in a nice package (writing wise). I've read up to chapter 444 so far, and the story went from "sounds interesting" to "this is stupid, why am I still reading this". I hope it gets better again, but I doubt it, looking at the authors ability so far

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sandeep_seth
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Age of Wu Mo is a mystery to me. He was supposed to be young around 22 - 23 but after he created the aging serum there are hints that he supposedly around 30. even his forgotten girlfriend is mentioned to be 30. Along with things you mentioned this is already a mess.

Daoist2XZHBl
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Before Chapter 431, he was around 18-19 years old, but after he's around 35 years old so you had about 16-17 year time skip

sandeep_seth:Age of Wu Mo is a mystery to me. He was supposed to be young around 22 - 23 but after he created the aging serum there are hints that he supposedly around 30. even his forgotten girlfriend is mentioned to be 30. Along with things you mentioned this is already a mess.