Review Detail of no_sleep in A Strawberry Hidden in the Leaves
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I only read 3 chapters of the ff while the writing quality is phenomenal. The entirety of it is written from others perspective with no explanation on how the mc got to be the way he was or any of his motivations to do literally anything. Also there are minor plot holes in the story that don’t really get explained other than it being part of the butterfly effect. While I didn’t enjoy reading it I would still recommend others to due so.
A Strawberry Hidden in the Leaves
Demigod_Patronus
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hey author i see you're active so that means you didn't drop the novel right , i was having second thoughts of starting it because it was only seven chapters , please let me know if you would mass release or release any ch soon alright
Demigod_Patronus:Ah yeah the perspective is purposeful that way to keep the readers guessing 😅 And I plan on exploring more of his childhood later on in a non linear narrative. I didn't want to stop the plot with a lot of training arc junk pre canon. Thanks for the great review nonetheless!
I just published a chapter in my HP fic today. I have a full-time job and I can't do mass releases due to time constraints. I'll be alternating between these two stories of mine. The HP fic is going to end soon, so I'll focus on this one completely after that
Cuzin:hey author i see you're active so that means you didn't drop the novel right , i was having second thoughts of starting it because it was only seven chapters , please let me know if you would mass release or release any ch soon alright