Review Detail of StormBreaker in Winds of Change (DxD)
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I can't say much about the grammar because it's not my first language so I give it 5 stars, if you like that the mc has a meaningless pokemon collection this is his story, the same author said that they would have development to join the Harem where It's not like that, because the fmc falls in love with the mc and not even a day has passed. He had also said that he will not show off his powers and what happens in the following paragraphs, exactly he presumes them. Suerte.
Winds of Change (DxD)
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??? Did you even read this past Chapter 1? The author literally stated that the first 3 are quick and chapter 1 is his worst work. The past few chapters have only had interactions with other females and plot going forward. Penemue - he teased her because she teased him, no other development. Grayfia - is soon to join but probably not till the end of Riser's arc. Natsume and Shigune - They see him as a good friend for the time being. Ophis & Ingvild - They are literally roommates with him. Ingvild is showing signs of interest as of chapter 13. Ophis is still learning about emotions. Akeno, Kuroka and Lavinia - Two are teenagers and are the quickest that joined and fell for him. If you know their backstories then it makes sense for them to, since Jin did quite a lot for them in a short time frame. I have no clue how Lavinia’s story arc is going to play out. For now, it feels like the red string of fate for her, if you even know what that is. Jin (MC) hasn't shown off once? He killed three fallen that attacked him and Akeno with the purpose or killing them. He fought Vali twice since the guy challenged/requested him. A crowd just watched them, he also one shotted Vali both times since he wanted to end it quickly. The same can be said for Sairaorg and Dulio. People were just there to see them, he fought them because THEY REQUESTED it from him. Both fights ended quickly. The two times he showed some power was to Sirzechs because he was literally being threatened by him and the girls in Kyoto since the conversation was going that way. Have you actually read this? Or are you basing this on chapter 1 the author has admitted to being his worst work? Because this site's readers intelligence is low at times since they choose to ignore the Synopsis.