Review Detail of shirou_sureiya in Winds of Change (DxD)
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so your telling me it took you two years to write atleast 1 chapters for real hahahahhahahahaahhahahahahahahahhahahahahahhaahhahahahahahaahahaha
Winds of Change (DxD)
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If you look carefully, it says "Edit" in the synopsis. So it seems pretty obvious to me that Johnfrancis_suan wrote this review before the author added this little sentence. And as a foreigner who doesn't master the English language, I thought before reading the edited note that the author took two whole years to write the first chapter.
killersoul:... clearly didn't read the entire synopsis basically he made a draft chapter a couple years ago and just updated that and decided to publish it
yea but the note that said he wrote it 2 years ago is enough to point out that it was written by that time and the 'finished' being especially highlighted meaning it's likely just edited using a bit of brain power means he could've figured that out
Delfreed:If you look carefully, it says "Edit" in the synopsis. So it seems pretty obvious to me that Johnfrancis_suan wrote this review before the author added this little sentence. And as a foreigner who doesn't master the English language, I thought before reading the edited note that the author took two whole years to write the first chapter.
Yeah, I understand your point of view, and I admit that it was possible to guess what the author meant by the quotation mark. Still, that doesn't change the fact that his sentence was poorly worded (from my point of view at least). By that, I mean instead of saying: "I wrote this 2 years ago and finally 'finished' the first chapter", he could have said instead: "I wrote this 2 years ago, and finally finished making some modifications on the first chapter". This way, no one would have been confused.
killersoul:yea but the note that said he wrote it 2 years ago is enough to point out that it was written by that time and the 'finished' being especially highlighted meaning it's likely just edited using a bit of brain power means he could've figured that out
