The synopsis, character design, and world background are superb and impressive. Although a minor correction (Punctuation Marks) is needed, it doesn't affect the flow of the story. Overall, it's 9/10 for me. PS: If you have free time, you can update it at least one chapter a day. it will help you gain more readers. Cheer up and keep up the good work!
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