Review Detail of Hiddenveil in CONTROLLING TIME IN NARUTO (Dropped)

Item: CONTROLLING TIME IN NARUTO (Dropped)
Rating: 5

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HiddenveilAuthor1yrHiddenveil

Nothing here just another shame less person rating their work 5 stars. I read a lot Naruto fanfics and observed that al most all of them had the mc becoming overpowered in the 3 chapter and having a harem. So although the mc here will become overpowered too, that would be after time skips and he will have only one girl and some characters who were single in Naruto will also get someone.

CONTROLLING TIME IN NARUTO (Dropped)

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Abhinav_Reddy_6592Lv1Abhinav_Reddy_6592

is it harem ?

Man_of_culture_69:It's stolen and even original wasn't harem

1yr

ReimossLv13Reimoss

I think this is stolen, still didn't read this but there is a chinese novel about Kakashi's Older brother controlling time

1yr

Man_of_culture_69Lv2Man_of_culture_69

It's stolen and even original wasn't harem

1yr

HiddenveilAuthorHiddenveil

I have already said that in the first chapter not all this is my idea but as the story advances it is all mine

Reimoss:I think this is stolen, still didn't read this but there is a chinese novel about Kakashi's Older brother controlling time

1yr

ZekrilLv4Zekril

Ohh i see so the concept have the same root but will have a different fruit.

Hiddenveil:I have already said that in the first chapter not all this is my idea but as the story advances it is all mine

1yr

Man_of_culture_69Lv2Man_of_culture_69

Abhinav_Reddy_6592:is it harem ?

1yr

LowPriorityCitizenLv3LowPriorityCitizen

isnt this the guy who got a clock like golder finger? he speedup his own time so he become stronger faster, but also age faster. then he come to One Piece, bla bla bla.. it was good really, i read an mtl, pls author wrote that down and just take credit for translating it (no offense)

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LowPriorityCitizenLv3LowPriorityCitizen

nvm, i think author add some of his own story now that i checked the original mtl.... anyway

LowPriorityCitizen:isnt this the guy who got a clock like golder finger? he speedup his own time so he become stronger faster, but also age faster. then he come to One Piece, bla bla bla.. it was good really, i read an mtl, pls author wrote that down and just take credit for translating it (no offense)

1yr

HiddenveilAuthorHiddenveil

Let me make it clear. Only the power system was taken from the C.N. please read first and then comment. It was not a translation. It was my own. The root was same but fruit was different.

LowPriorityCitizen:isnt this the guy who got a clock like golder finger? he speedup his own time so he become stronger faster, but also age faster. then he come to One Piece, bla bla bla.. it was good really, i read an mtl, pls author wrote that down and just take credit for translating it (no offense)

1yr

LowPriorityCitizenLv3LowPriorityCitizen

oke, let me read then, perhaps this is better, hope so

Hiddenveil:Let me make it clear. Only the power system was taken from the C.N. please read first and then comment. It was not a translation. It was my own. The root was same but fruit was different.

1yr