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haaa ~ seriously... i hate to admit it but this is to sad. ive read all your book with system and all of em' look promising and have a big potential with the concept and everything. apart from the grammars for me all is good. But as the stories progress you seems to miss certain parts of the details. I really love the concept of your book with op MC and the systems. I hope you can focus on 1 book cause you hv 3 book with the same concept right but different plots. But i hope you can focus on one book after another. Cause most the reader will prefer the quality over quantity. Overall i love your idea, concept, ranking system and everything but the story development still need improvement. Aside from grammars that i think will improve over time. keep up a god work author

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