Review Detail of MWse in Diana

There were some small but repetitive writing mistakes. The story seems easy to read, but make sure to read the story once or twice slowly, to notice when a phrase is confusing. The character design and world background are close to none, but I can't help but give 5 stars since there's not much you can add to a single chapter. I like the way you phrase the description. The chapter itself is pretty tiny, but this is just a personal opinion. Overall, the story is engaging and has potential. Keep up with good work!