Review Detail of Whatthejug_0221 in The Vampire Cat System

I'll be frank, the English is NOT the best but I still find myself absolutely in love with this story. The Vampire/Cat combo is pretty unique, I like the idea of it and can't wait to see how it develops further in the novel! Vampires have always been cool to me and the cat combo is a exciting twist to it. Also, I really like these kind of novels where the MC has to be careful and wary of his actions that might lead to him getting caught, or even worse, killed. I think there's a brilliant balance between his suppression of power while not being SUPER OP. Most novels that go with this plot makes the MC so strong that it's boring, or hides their power for no good reason other than to be secretly powerful for no reason... I really enjoy the direction of this story, although the beginning starts off a bit rough, the developments are very interesting and I really enjoy the dynamics of the characters and school environment. **MAJOR SPOILER** I also REALLY like the creativity of the beast bloodlines like the Paper angle, and the fact these bloodlines can be improved through training thus gaining new abilities is brilliant! The mix of technology, beasts, aliens, and planetary travel is a very cool setting, which I personally like how it's all balanced. Now about the bad stuff. Because of the bad English, explanations tend to be very redundant, there's unnecessary long expositions, some words are repeated way too often in a single paragraph, the lack of vocabulary is hurting this story a lot, grammar is very bad, and the thing that bothers me the most is the random shift of tone from the author's descriptions. It's almost like a weird combination between the characters thought and the author themselves, but since there's no clear shift between them it feels out of place and ruins the mood. Fortunately, this isn't often and only happens here and there. Despite these flaws I still absolutely LOVE this novel and sincerely think this is a great story. ❤️