Since this is my own review, I'm making this 5 star for only my own amusement, take no heed to it.I promise y'all once I start another FF, I'm gonna do better, it's not gonna be cringe anymore, I promise, I already have something in the drafts..
I_Sensei
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LIKEIt's pretty good for a first novel. Just remember to proofread and check Grammer since some people's eye twitch if it's bad, but overall, it is readable, and the people who like it will like it no matter what so don't worry if it's not a masterpiece just let the creativity flow and show your journey as a new author while we enjoy the MC's journey throughout the multiverse.