Review Detail of Yvonne_Jemutai in In It Together Forever

Nice story, I am also a writer. but I was thinking that a lot needs to be done on grammar and paragraphing, editing too. Hmm, maybe work a little bit on more editing or something. Nice luck in the coming next, I am a participant too. Waiting to read more...Here's my email if you'll want to reach out yvonnejemutai174@gmail.com