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The setting on a wide public place can be confusing if the author does not set the limit of area. Say it the limit of area is the rooms in a building or the functions of building. To make the setting does not spread too wide, from this chapter highlight each rooms used. Even when the plot flows fast, the author will not lose the focus. Go ahead, Author. Good job.

Kangen - Ku Akan Datang

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Nice comment. Really appreciate the advise. Yes, i will follow your suggestion. Many thanks.