The story is nice. It's really nice and a steady read, but it follows the clichéd high-school trope. I don't have any problems with clichéd tropes, I especially like them and you wrote yours well but I wish your characters had more diversity to them. This would make the story stand out.
Gladys_Quarshie
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LIKEGladys_Quarshie:thank you for your really honest and constructive review. you rock!