Review Detail of Erewon in Beast Evolution

From the start to chapter 48 (where I dropped), it's just a successions of clumsy mistakes and pointless actions. I will not criticize the plot as it is the art of the author and, even though I have a personal opinion, I am not in right to insult other's art. I kinda disappointed in this but I can only encourage you to make your own opinions. Post-scriptum: You must be quite young with the way you describe s*x, it's so silly :P. You will understand one day...