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Review Detail of Zamir in Beast Evolution

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Zamir
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I don’t really write reviews but since I read until the current chap I might as well give some feedback. The writing quality is iffy it’s not the worst but it’s definitely not the best. The author is pretty stable with his updates so you don’t have to worry about much on that front. Now for story development there really isn’t much of any. Granted we are only 86 chapters in so I guess you could just chalk it up to it being slow paced. The character design and world background is where this novel truly fails. The characters are pretty generic nothing to really write home about except for the mc and that’s in a bad way. The mc for lack of better terms is an idiot. He reincarnates into a world he knows nothing about and doesn’t even try to find out any general knowledge unless it comes up in a conversation which he just gets made fun of for not knowing anything. He’s more of a go with the flow kind of guy with no real goals or aspirations. Like how he joins the knight academy just because the girl he meets wants to join it. I just mentioned the mc not knowing anything about the world he’s in so we the readers also don’t know anything about the world. Overall I would give this a 2/5

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Firstly all what you said is true, why because this is actually my first book and I'm improving every day, if you keep reading it will get better, thanks for the review