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95_novel_maniac_95
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the concept is quite good but the writing quality is bad...repeated words and grammar aside, his and her are mixed, wrong words used for a lot of things, and sudden Japanese word used in between breaks the flow. characters are also described in a young master's way... It's a good time to pass if you can gloss over these detail while reading.

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One Piece : Dungeon Trading System

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Estrenger_HK
Estrenger_HKLv1Estrenger_HK

More is readable

Estrenger_HK
Estrenger_HKLv1Estrenger_HK

Is a FF not a novel

95_novel_maniac_95
95_novel_maniac_95Lv595_novel_maniac_95

even Ff has to be readable at least...

Estrenger_HK:Is a FF not a novel
Estrenger_HK
Estrenger_HKLv1Estrenger_HK

Is no good grammar more is readable

OutofideasLOL
OutofideasLOLLv12OutofideasLOL

I mean you yourself have bad grammar so you shouldn't comment

Estrenger_HK:Is no good grammar more is readable
MTRProcrastinator
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emotional damage*

OutofideasLOL:I mean you yourself have bad grammar so you shouldn't comment