the concept is quite good but the writing quality is bad...repeated words and grammar aside, his and her are mixed, wrong words used for a lot of things, and sudden Japanese word used in between breaks the flow. characters are also described in a young master's way... It's a good time to pass if you can gloss over these detail while reading.
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LIKEOutofideasLOL:I mean you yourself have bad grammar so you shouldn't comment