Review Detail of Dadevilslastcry in The Holo

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Rating: 4

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DadevilslastcryLv111yrDadevilslastcry

First of all, I was confused about the dialogue/ conversation about the characters in per chapters. It would be better if you put some space on each dialogue so it wont be confusing but all in all , the story is interesting and good. looking forward for your improvements

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Note_The1st

Liked it!

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Note_The1stAuthorNote_The1st

thanks so much brother, I'll try as much as possible to improve on every corrections made, don't forget to add a collection, and please tell your friends about it, I need all the critical evaluation I can get, thanks again I appreciate

1yr

Note_The1stAuthorNote_The1st

thanks brother, don't forget to add a collection, and I'll improve🙏🙏

1yr