Review Detail of Note_The1st in The Holo

Hello guys, I should have dropped this earlier, but I'm still figuring the plot and other stuffs, but now I'll tell you. this is like my first ever attempted and sure I know am not all that good at it but I know with time we'll get there together. I'll make some grammatical blunders sure, but I have you guys to correct me the best way you can, to those who did I'm grateful. paragraphs were really hard in the beginning but I'm getting a hand of them thanks to those who pointed that out. the plot and the story might shift from direction, from time to time but we'll always be on track and keep the goal first. presently we're at 2k but I know we can do better so guys, tell a friend and let them tell a friend, honestly I'm in the dark about the plot like you guys, I had ideas and I put them down, so at the right moment I'll introduce them. Last and not the least thanks every one I guess the collections and the powers tones, I love you guys, we'll be up there soon I can feel it.