Review Detail of BBWulf in Reborn in Mushoku Tensei with Unique Skill Great Sage
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I honestly don’t know what to say. Just read it yourself and develop your own opinions. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Reborn in Mushoku Tensei with Unique Skill Great Sage
Akros_Zero
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Akros_Zero:Firstly, I have accepted his criticism and changed many of my censored words leaving a few. Secondly I have been improving my grammar. I have just stated my reasons which I think is better to reason up with. I am not the one who is not trying to improve. Secondly, you haven't read the story yet, which means you aren't my reader. 😐😑 Thirdly, I don't care about your opinions, such as act like 'grown up'. I am still growing, my character is still developing and it's upto my surroundings, my mentors on what it will form. Thus even if it were to seem childish I won't change the important points.Lastly, you aren't my reader, there is no reason for you to be state anything. I am not insulting anyone, neither doing any other worse things.You should understand that you just can't state your opinion, without involving yourself in the situation, that will be just one-sided and hypocritical.
Gave two stars because that’s what I thought it was worth. It’s an opinion. That’s why I said read first to develop your own opinions. 🤔
Akros_Zero:Bruh giving 2 stars without stating the reason.image
It does affect the rating of the fanfic so I request you state the reason for why you gave such a rating, rating of the novel does affect my spirit to write it.
BBWulf:Gave two stars because that’s what I thought it was worth. It’s an opinion. That’s why I said read first to develop your own opinions. 🤔
Alright. The punctuation isn’tgood. The character feels paper thin, and kind of cookie cutter. What little I could read of the plot is just as weak. The dialogue is done incorrect, unless you’re writing a script and not a story. There’s so many sensored words that it makes the text ugly and distracting from the story. These are all just things from three chapters of reading. I don’t know if things get better, but those three chapters make me think not.
Akros_Zero:It does affect the rating of the fanfic so I request you state the reason for why you gave such a rating, rating of the novel does affect my spirit to write it.
Bruh, are you paying any money to ready this that you have so many demands? Grammar will improve slowly as I constantly write new chapters, secondly Already told you English is not my Main Language, as for censored words it's necessary unless you want me to be banned from Webnovel. If this has been a premium Novel, I would have made everything 100 times better, but doing it without any returns not even a single cent of my free time, so instead of watching Anime or reading Novels, I am sacrificing my fun to write this, still not satisfied with this Answer? As for the first three chapters they are info dump necessary for World Building, there will be such a chapter once in a while necessary for world-building. My fanfic deserves at least 3 stars. I have seen many Engish dead fanfics getting 4 stars just because the plot is good, so why instead of looking just at the bad points look for the good points.
BBWulf:Alright. The punctuation isn’tgood. The character feels paper thin, and kind of cookie cutter. What little I could read of the plot is just as weak. The dialogue is done incorrect, unless you’re writing a script and not a story. There’s so many sensored words that it makes the text ugly and distracting from the story. These are all just things from three chapters of reading. I don’t know if things get better, but those three chapters make me think not.
Look, clearly my opinion is an outlier here. I get you probably worked hard, but what I’m judging is the end product. You will probably get better as you keep writing, and you’ll also likely get tons more 4-5 star reviews. The only thing I can suggest is to not let lower reviews bug you. It’s an opinion. One that clearly doesn’t match yours. You’ll spend more time arguing with people online than it’s worth if you let anything under 3 stars bug you. Honestly arguing about it will likely just amuse internet trolls. Tl;dr: It’s just an opinion. Move on, and try not to take opposing opinions personally. Focus on those like minded opinions
Akros_Zero:Bruh, are you paying any money to ready this that you have so many demands? Grammar will improve slowly as I constantly write new chapters, secondly Already told you English is not my Main Language, as for censored words it's necessary unless you want me to be banned from Webnovel. If this has been a premium Novel, I would have made everything 100 times better, but doing it without any returns not even a single cent of my free time, so instead of watching Anime or reading Novels, I am sacrificing my fun to write this, still not satisfied with this Answer? As for the first three chapters they are info dump necessary for World Building, there will be such a chapter once in a while necessary for world-building. My fanfic deserves at least 3 stars. I have seen many Engish dead fanfics getting 4 stars just because the plot is good, so why instead of looking just at the bad points look for the good points.image
Akros_Zero:Bruh, are you paying any money to ready this that you have so many demands? Grammar will improve slowly as I constantly write new chapters, secondly Already told you English is not my Main Language, as for censored words it's necessary unless you want me to be banned from Webnovel. If this has been a premium Novel, I would have made everything 100 times better, but doing it without any returns not even a single cent of my free time, so instead of watching Anime or reading Novels, I am sacrificing my fun to write this, still not satisfied with this Answer? As for the first three chapters they are info dump necessary for World Building, there will be such a chapter once in a while necessary for world-building. My fanfic deserves at least 3 stars. I have seen many Engish dead fanfics getting 4 stars just because the plot is good, so why instead of looking just at the bad points look for the good points.image
Bro, i haven’t read yet but this “you haven’t paid” argument is invalid here. The dude held back his negative criticisms and told people to read and form their own opinion, then you INSISTED on him giving a reason why he didn’t like it, and when he did you got defensive over constructive criticisms? It’s true that none of us are paying, but in the same sense none of us have to say we like a story we don’t like, at the very least act like a grown up and accept the guy’s well intentioned constructive criticism
Akros_Zero:Bruh, are you paying any money to ready this that you have so many demands? Grammar will improve slowly as I constantly write new chapters, secondly Already told you English is not my Main Language, as for censored words it's necessary unless you want me to be banned from Webnovel. If this has been a premium Novel, I would have made everything 100 times better, but doing it without any returns not even a single cent of my free time, so instead of watching Anime or reading Novels, I am sacrificing my fun to write this, still not satisfied with this Answer? As for the first three chapters they are info dump necessary for World Building, there will be such a chapter once in a while necessary for world-building. My fanfic deserves at least 3 stars. I have seen many Engish dead fanfics getting 4 stars just because the plot is good, so why instead of looking just at the bad points look for the good points.image
Firstly, I have accepted his criticism and changed many of my censored words leaving a few. Secondly I have been improving my grammar. I have just stated my reasons which I think is better to reason up with. I am not the one who is not trying to improve. Secondly, you haven't read the story yet, which means you aren't my reader. 😐😑 Thirdly, I don't care about your opinions, such as act like 'grown up'. I am still growing, my character is still developing and it's upto my surroundings, my mentors on what it will form. Thus even if it were to seem childish I won't change the important points.Lastly, you aren't my reader, there is no reason for you to be state anything. I am not insulting anyone, neither doing any other worse things.You should understand that you just can't state your opinion, without involving yourself in the situation, that will be just one-sided and hypocritical.
RustyBoi:Bro, i haven’t read yet but this “you haven’t paid” argument is invalid here. The dude held back his negative criticisms and told people to read and form their own opinion, then you INSISTED on him giving a reason why he didn’t like it, and when he did you got defensive over constructive criticisms? It’s true that none of us are paying, but in the same sense none of us have to say we like a story we don’t like, at the very least act like a grown up and accept the guy’s well intentioned constructive criticism
if you don't want to censor words, then don't write such words in the first place, there are millions of words in the English vocabulary and you are telling me you don't know any other word to express yourself other than cussing?
Akros_Zero:Bruh, are you paying any money to ready this that you have so many demands? Grammar will improve slowly as I constantly write new chapters, secondly Already told you English is not my Main Language, as for censored words it's necessary unless you want me to be banned from Webnovel. If this has been a premium Novel, I would have made everything 100 times better, but doing it without any returns not even a single cent of my free time, so instead of watching Anime or reading Novels, I am sacrificing my fun to write this, still not satisfied with this Answer? As for the first three chapters they are info dump necessary for World Building, there will be such a chapter once in a while necessary for world-building. My fanfic deserves at least 3 stars. I have seen many Engish dead fanfics getting 4 stars just because the plot is good, so why instead of looking just at the bad points look for the good points.image
Sir_Squirrel:if you don't want to censor words, then don't write such words in the first place, there are millions of words in the English vocabulary and you are telling me you don't know any other word to express yourself other than cussing?
Also you haven't read the fix apparently, since such words are only used when necessary. This is not Bakugo cussing for every incident. Not to mention, I have abandoned censoring words like a few months ago seeing no one's chapters are getting deleted like beforw
Sir_Squirrel:if you don't want to censor words, then don't write such words in the first place, there are millions of words in the English vocabulary and you are telling me you don't know any other word to express yourself other than cussing?
Akros_Zero:Not everyone is a Shakespeare, they don't understand complex and less known words.
Akros_Zero:Also you haven't read the fix apparently, since such words are only used when necessary. This is not Bakugo cussing for every incident. Not to mention, I have abandoned censoring words like a few months ago seeing no one's chapters are getting deleted like beforw
Akros_Zero:Bruh, are you paying any money to ready this that you have so many demands? Grammar will improve slowly as I constantly write new chapters, secondly Already told you English is not my Main Language, as for censored words it's necessary unless you want me to be banned from Webnovel. If this has been a premium Novel, I would have made everything 100 times better, but doing it without any returns not even a single cent of my free time, so instead of watching Anime or reading Novels, I am sacrificing my fun to write this, still not satisfied with this Answer? As for the first three chapters they are info dump necessary for World Building, there will be such a chapter once in a while necessary for world-building. My fanfic deserves at least 3 stars. I have seen many Engish dead fanfics getting 4 stars just because the plot is good, so why instead of looking just at the bad points look for the good points.image
dude i checked and it looks like your the only review that doesnst go along with everyone and thinks that this novel sucks, i dont mean that your review is negative im saying that you put less than 3 stars and didnt say it was a great novel, also thanks for the review i almost ended up using my time on this thing so its really appreciated. author probably deleted those reviews cause i cant find any
BBWulf:Alright. The punctuation isn’tgood. The character feels paper thin, and kind of cookie cutter. What little I could read of the plot is just as weak. The dialogue is done incorrect, unless you’re writing a script and not a story. There’s so many sensored words that it makes the text ugly and distracting from the story. These are all just things from three chapters of reading. I don’t know if things get better, but those three chapters make me think not.
I mean, it could just be that people on here are used to reading things that are below subpar. Most of the fics on here fall into that category, after all.
Ireallylikereading:dude i checked and it looks like your the only review that doesnst go along with everyone and thinks that this novel sucks, i dont mean that your review is negative im saying that you put less than 3 stars and didnt say it was a great novel, also thanks for the review i almost ended up using my time on this thing so its really appreciated. author probably deleted those reviews cause i cant find any
You were disappointing in the fate Poseidon story so I suspect it's the same here as there, total nerf, and beta
Akros_Zero:Eh, ask some other guy