Review Detail of Ash_RoSe in Naruto: Indra Otsutsuki Template System

First of all, the chapters are very short. We read almost nothing about the story as he advertises his own book at the beginning and end of each chapter. Even simple signs are not used for the dialogues and system messages. In addition, there are 2 unnecessary letters that even a person who does not know anything will notice, for example: Hitachi uchiha. yes, there were two such places in the story. As for the narrative, mc is gaining powers in an absurd way. Girls fall in love with very simple things. While mc's powers and knowledge could easily reach the top of the world, suddenly the system event was thrown. Then what mc said is the classic sentence of a brain dead person that I am ashamed of even when reading it. (spoiler) For example: While mc was walking down the aisle with his two girlfriends on his first day at the academy, a boy stopped them and said, "How do you get Ino on your arm?" says a similar sentence. mc, on the other hand, pats Ino's head and says, "you don't have to be afraid. I'm here and I'll protect you"... I don't know how the other reviews were made, but I don't recommend it. be prepared to read these. normally 2.8 points, it was because it was an original idea. But I don't want to give it that low when the score is this high.