Review Detail of Demon_Asmodeo in Naruto: Indra Otsutsuki Template System

Item: Naruto: Indra Otsutsuki Template System
Rating: 5

Review detail

Demon_AsmodeoAuthor2yrDemon_Asmodeo

My main language is not English so please excuse my grammatical errors. I hope you check out my other novel Return Of The Demon God Dusk which I know you will love as well and support it in the collections.

Naruto: Indra Otsutsuki Template System

Demon_Asmodeo

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InfinitesimalLv13Infinitesimal

Sistem o no sistem

2yr

TrackShadowLv4TrackShadow

Please don't be harem . please . such kind of revenge ,villain plot is destroyed by love and all. And this is in every novel. Try to be a little unique. There are enough romance and harem stories. No need for another one. Please

2yr

ABananaStoleMyDogLv12ABananaStoleMyDog

Reading the dialogue hurts my brain since it has no way of seperating itself from everything else. Recommend adding “ at the start and end of what is being spoken.

2yr

1111hhhLv11111hhh

A sweet harem, please be a multiple universe

2yr

RyughaaLv14Ryughaa

WAste of time

1yr