Grammar is ok. The premise of the story was interesting. Why not the story of how he grew to become so strong or how he concur that planet with 3 year. Nope, you choose to send him to earth to go to school tf why? This dude is a warrior bread for destruction, hand-picked by their leader and I want me to believe they just allowed him to go to earth as some sort of a vacation. The story became after the whole earth incident. There is no room to grow power-wise. Maybe in character but I'm not here for a slice of life.
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