A good read!! The story is escalating in a nice pace and the story build up is good. I have first three chapters and I like the writing style of the writer. No heavy words, and still explained the situations and actions easily. Nice work, its just the writer needs to work on her punctuation and need to be careful not to swap tense. Else the story is going fine and has a potential.
Dumpling_Aunt
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LIKEDumpling_Aunt:thank you for your honest review🤗 n yeah, I need to work on my grammar 😢 my nemesis.
Aislinn_Jasper:You'll do great, don't worry. All the best with your work!!