Review Detail of Deikon in Idle Mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer
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hi all. I've read pretty decent into the story about a hundred chapters and honestly there's no reason to call this book an idle system or have a system in this book because it's barely used and I like system books when they're well written but if I'm going to have a check in then I should check in if I'm going to have certain capabilities I should be using them a little bit more frequently and I should be using them in ways to reader can understand just to pop up and say oh I've been checking in 80 times in this one place! Then I have a ton of potions to use in this big fight! hmm, well I never read that you checked in anywhere I never read that you did these things I never read that you got this ring of this or cloak of that or who I checked in here and got this book...... I mean seriously man if you're going to write about a system include what the system does sometimes in the chapter so we understand what is going on instead of just dropping on us out of the blue nice try. #dropped.
Idle Mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer
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i get what you mean , though ultimately, this is not a book that's focused on the system anyway. if you look at the title of the book, you'd see that there's no 'system' in there. why? cause it's not the focus of the book...it'll never be. which is why it's on tag instead... catch what I mean here? the mc is signing in on the background, where do you think he's getting all the resources accumulating in his inventory? ps. if you prefer to read a braindead story where the mc just reacts with whatever he's getting from his cheat until he becomes invincible, then i'm sorry that this book isn't for you... #bye!
nope. I don't want a brain dead story. however I do want a cohesive story that incorporates and shows how the MC is growing instead of assuming he is checking in. There's too much assumption going for this story to be interesting. if I wanted to assume things then it would be fine. thank you for your reply
Hateful_Fellow:i get what you mean , though ultimately, this is not a book that's focused on the system anyway. if you look at the title of the book, you'd see that there's no 'system' in there. why? cause it's not the focus of the book...it'll never be. which is why it's on tag instead... catch what I mean here? the mc is signing in on the background, where do you think he's getting all the resources accumulating in his inventory? ps. if you prefer to read a braindead story where the mc just reacts with whatever he's getting from his cheat until he becomes invincible, then i'm sorry that this book isn't for you... #bye!
Hateful_Fellow:i get what you mean , though ultimately, this is not a book that's focused on the system anyway. if you look at the title of the book, you'd see that there's no 'system' in there. why? cause it's not the focus of the book...it'll never be. which is why it's on tag instead... catch what I mean here? the mc is signing in on the background, where do you think he's getting all the resources accumulating in his inventory? ps. if you prefer to read a braindead story where the mc just reacts with whatever he's getting from his cheat until he becomes invincible, then i'm sorry that this book isn't for you... #bye!