Review Detail of At_Tyagi in Picking up Girls With My System

Hmm well he knows English and can write but the story is like he wants sex for system points goes out 2random girls take him to a hotel and have sex no scenes in that too only "u know how it went" (supposedly system has charm aura everyone acts like they have never seen a man i mean they have father brothers friends outside the academy still even freshers who were outside some time ago stare at him... He has 6points charm zzzz still -_- .... ) Good way of writing but non descriptive and non realistic interactions