Review Detail of Vahvel in Gamer in Overlord

A very good story with few faults. The writing quality is a little wonky at times, but it can be explained by the fact that the author seems to be writing on their phone. Still, nothing is unreadable and everything flows nicely. The updates are stable (at least as of now) and keep coming daily. The story develops quite fast, and everything is being set up for the MC to finally go to the New World. The MC is likeable and interesting; doesn't seem to be a braindead moron. Hope it stays that way. World is rich and well implemented. Overlord's original polluted world is explored and Yggdrasil as a game is properly brought to spotlight. Overall, a solid 4.8/5. I only hope that the author doesn't drop this story. It has unfortunately happened with so many wonderfully budding Overlord fanfics.