Review Detail of StoryCraft in (Velocity)

Hey everyone, it's forcespeed4 here, and I wanted to address something about the story I've been posting. I've been reading through the reviews and feedback, and I've come to realize that you are right and there are a lot of inconsistencies and confusion in the plot. I want to apologize for the inconvenience it has caused, and I want to thank you all for your honest reviews and support. As a result, I'm rewriting the story to ensure that the plot is more consistent and clear. I'm committed to making this story the best it can be, and I hope you'll continue to follow along on this journey with me. Once again, I'm sorry for any confusion, and I appreciate your patience and understanding. Thank you all, and I'll see you soon with the updated story! I've placed indications on the chapter titles so you know which chapter I have rewritten and what I haven't done yet.