I like the story so far. I hope Annie gets her revenge on Susan and Jack. Those two deserve to suffer for going behind her back like they did. The story could use some editing and a proofreader. I can help with that. I'm a freelance copyeditor and proofreader. If you're interested in my services, please feel free to contact me. I'm trying to build up my work portfolio. Prices are negotiable.
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