Basically this is just a story containing explanations, lacking dialogue. I like the world design, but not your MC because he is too confident and arrogant. Besides that, you the author only made the MC the only smart one in the story, while the others are stupid and idiots. The story is just wish fulfillment (not in an adult context), the author immediately uses a method called plot armor to keep the MC on top.
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