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Review Detail of Newtothisapp in The Flash: What If [Completed]

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Newtothisapp
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Honestly, somehow, your story got worse and worse, especially the chapter where he meets the other universe’s Barry’s dad. It disgusts me that he completely replaced his real dad with some random guy.

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The Flash: What If [Completed]

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Fiery_Scar24
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um that actually happened in the TV show, so they're just following the show probably

Night132
Night132AuthorNight132

Replace? No, but he has someone that can finally take a bit of pain away from the mc and lighten the load. That was the point of introducing the other Henry. There might be a bit of misunderstanding or you've just skipped it entirely.

Night132
Night132AuthorNight132

The time in the cabin? No, that didn't happen in the show. I just added it in for some character development and all that.

Fiery_Scar24:um that actually happened in the TV show, so they're just following the show probably