Review Detail of Dumplings_4_Life in A Book Can't Be Judged By The Cover

Hey, a fellow reader here, I'm not a professional in reviewing but overall I like the chapters here. The grammars is on point and the description was well thought out. But there is one problem, not a big one though, it's just the amount of words in one paragraph was too long and maybe if you could, cut it down a little. Turn it into more paragraphs. Yeah, that's it, I love the chapters though. Keep up the good work.