This is my review sfter reading up to the end of chap. 20 Writing quality 4 stars. the fic is a nice read with few to none grammatical error. though there were some words that cause some misunderstanding, hence the 4 star. Story Development 5 stars. The author has some originality on his fic with new and refreshing take on the dgz universe. 3 star character design. well, since its not completely the authors ownership of the franchise, just 3 star as respect for the original owner. updatung stability 5 star. the author updates his work regularly, hope he keek this up. world background 4 stars. not completely original but because the author started with his own take for the fic, i give you 4 stars.
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