Review Detail of carrotpie in A World Where Women Are the Rulers

Also the dialogue is really blocky and awkward.

robotic i see, author's inexperience...

looking for honest revives on my novel, Villain's Plot Reversal System

Review*, Checked your account and that’s not your novel. Also The novel on this app is just a copy of another translation .

how is is not my novel? I have posted it on first Royal Road first and later here. And please do name the novel you think this is a translation of. I would really like to check it myself

Your account doesn’t say you made it. Also you should work on your grammar it’s all over the place .

Oh, that's because it's not been vetted yet. That's why it is not showing in my original works

But I wanted to know where you got the idea that it was a translation of another novel.

oh ok, so it was a misunderstanding.

Yeah, I plan to do it but right now I am kinda tight on time so my focus is only on Villain's Plot Reversal System. In February I will have more time so I will start updating that more.