Review Detail of tsukareta in Atlantis: The Twilight of the gods [BL]

The writing quality is honestly amazing and is definitely above average. Everything is very descriptive to ensure a greater, visual experience for readers, which is nice. The plot seems interesting and diverse as well, because it incorporates different gods from around the world as well as the author’s own ones. So far, the stability of updates is steady, but it is too early to make too many comments on it. However, there are still some errors that I found, while reading through the book. This includes grammatical errors (e.g. tenses, some unsuitable use of words and accidental, extra spaces) and punctuation mistakes (e.g. missing/unnecessary commas and full stops as well as capitalisation errors). Just as a reminder, don’t worry too much as there’s just some and everyone makes mistakes. Good luck on writing the rest of your book!