Review Detail of H2Oz_Anxious in Re:write The Authors Transmigration

The story is good but writing needs a lot of improvement. It's good but on many points the whole paragraph gets messed up and it gets difficult to connect with character. You have to edit from the start and if English isn't your native language, do try to find someone to proofread. Use grammarly to make the story batter. The concept is good and engaging but with the mistakes, it could make readers bored. Just try it, I know you have the potential to do it.