Review Detail of Pclerk in The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Stuck with the story for 195 chapters. The earlier chapters are better than the later. Writing quality and stability of updates have been great from the start. If anything, updates can be slowed to help plan the story development a little better. It gets way more chaotic and pulled in to many different directions with all sorts of stuff going on at once. The earlier sections had a clearer story with stuff happening behind the scenes. Now it’s all happening at once. The story does start out with trying to develop the MC and supporting characters. The character development devolves around chapter 70-80. They seem to all become slightly more on the dumb side for no reason. The interactions developed earlier also start to stagnate and appear to disappear. The MC supposedly goes through some personality growth but will immediately regress from whatever he did within 5 chapters. The original design for the MC powers was great but the growth is weirder later on because some things are just thrown in like the red ring. World background was good at the beginning with Al sorts of good descriptors but has severely declined. Still on ok read but later chapters leave much to be desired. Planning some things out and reducing the number of characters or events may help add in missing details.